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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:08 pm

I only read the first three chapters because that was all I had time for. I have a headache and the black on the page is killing my eyes. Anyways, I'd have to say that the writing style is your classic; I.E. You're awesome, you're really cool, in with all the girls except the one you like. Nice description when it comes to the Mr. Matthews xhapters though. I do have to note something though, Knoll is a lot like me. Just saying. Oh, and you used a few Fire Emblem names.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:26 pm

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Still, I don't know what I could give.

Exactly what you said, something really bizarre. All who were in Testundia still remember your post about Cthuorian mating habits.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:29 pm

Ah, the original Cthuorians, a race which died to give birth to their young, which then feasted on their flesh.

But it depends on the kind of bizarre. Most of mine are sci-fi/alien, but I could easily come up with something more old age/medieval or dinosaurish.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:32 pm

Obviously, I've missed something here.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Mon Feb 01, 2010 5:02 pm

Sorry to double post and all (again) but, where are you, El?
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:11 pm

I know. He hasn't logged on in a long while.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Tue Sep 21, 2010 6:15 pm

Speaking of people who haven't logged on in FOREVER... Where is everybody?!?
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Tue Sep 21, 2010 8:50 pm

I was wondering that myself. This isn't exactly a popular forum, you know.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Wed Sep 22, 2010 5:04 am

Yes, but there's us. In our own little forum, free of trolls, spammers, those who like to get around swear blockers, etc. Currently, if the admin logged on a little more frequently, this would be one of the few perfect forums out there.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Wed Sep 22, 2010 5:08 pm

Not to be a downer, but if this forum would be one of the few perfect forums out there, a large part of it is because we don't have many people at all even taking part of the forum. Get what I'm saying?
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:33 am

Paige wrote:
Not to be a downer, but if this forum would be one of the few perfect forums out there, a large part of it is because we don't have many people at all even taking part of the forum. Get what I'm saying?

Agreed. What's the point of it being perfect if there's nobody here to witness it?
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:14 pm

True, maybe a larger member base would make it perfect. Creative members, that is!
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:31 pm

Yes, of course. Although, at the moment, any kind of member would be nice.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:58 pm

Well, you don't want a spammer, now do you?
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Thu Sep 23, 2010 5:55 pm

What we need is a way to advertise, kinda. Like, get the word out about this website.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Fri Sep 24, 2010 7:08 am

But how?
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Fri Sep 24, 2010 2:14 pm

I would help, but more than half of the people on my other site are total n00bs.

BUT, we do have several literate and creative people, who all happen to be my friends. I'll try to advertise to them. Plus, it would be a way for us to stay connected in case the insane hacking threats are real.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Fri Sep 24, 2010 4:48 pm

This is one of the things that requires the admin. To be taken more seriously, we need to go to an actual web hosting company, get a domain name and use it. Then, we advertise on Google, Youtube, Yahoo, etc. I don't think the admin would approve if we took off and left without him. Wait, we must. Jump on it now without shade, we must not. Yoda, I am! alien
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:57 pm

Doesn't Yoda die? Twisted Evil
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Sat Sep 25, 2010 2:51 pm

Zombie Yoda, I am! alien
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:51 pm

Bwahaha. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Wed Sep 29, 2010 2:51 pm

OK, I e-mailed him. Hopefully, he will reply.


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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Fri Oct 29, 2010 5:45 pm

Great news! He's back!
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Thu Nov 04, 2010 6:48 pm

Good. I was getting worried.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.   Thu Nov 04, 2010 6:55 pm

I assume you received my PM I sent out to all of you?
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