Wolf Fang. In Dire Need of Comments and Criticism.

I only read the first three chapters because that was all I had time for. I have a headache and the black on the page is killing my eyes. Anyways, I'd have to say that the writing style is your classic; I.E. You're awesome, you're really cool, in with all the girls except the one you like. Nice description when it comes to the Mr. Matthews xhapters though. I do have to note something though, Knoll is a lot like me. Just saying. Oh, and you used a few Fire Emblem names.

leestriter wrote:

Still, I don't know what I could give.

Exactly what you said, something really bizarre. All who were in Testundia still remember your post about Cthuorian mating habits.

Ah, the original Cthuorians, a race which died to give birth to their young, which then feasted on their flesh.

But it depends on the kind of bizarre. Most of mine are sci-fi/alien, but I could easily come up with something more old age/medieval or dinosaurish.

I know. He hasn't logged on in a long while.

I was wondering that myself. This isn't exactly a popular forum, you know.

Yes, but there's us. In our own little forum, free of trolls, spammers, those who like to get around swear blockers, etc. Currently, if the admin logged on a little more frequently, this would be one of the few perfect forums out there.

Paige wrote:

Not to be a downer, but if this forum would be one of the few perfect forums out there, a large part of it is because we don't have many people at all even taking part of the forum. Get what I'm saying?

Agreed. What's the point of it being perfect if there's nobody here to witness it?

True, maybe a larger member base would make it perfect. Creative members, that is!

Yes, of course. Although, at the moment, any kind of member would be nice.

Well, you don't want a spammer, now do you?

But how?

I would help, but more than half of the people on my other site are total n00bs.

BUT, we do have several literate and creative people, who all happen to be my friends. I'll try to advertise to them. Plus, it would be a way for us to stay connected in case the insane hacking threats are real.

This is one of the things that requires the admin. To be taken more seriously, we need to go to an actual web hosting company, get a domain name and use it. Then, we advertise on Google, Youtube, Yahoo, etc. I don't think the admin would approve if we took off and left without him. Wait, we must. Jump on it now without shade, we must not. Yoda, I am!

Doesn't Yoda die?

Zombie Yoda, I am!

Bwahaha. :3

OK, I e-mailed him. Hopefully, he will reply.

Great news! He's back!

I assume you received my PM I sent out to all of you?